Wednesday, August 15, 2007

Renga: Summer

Here is the renga so far. I think it has a couple more rounds in it:

Renga: Summer

A hot wind jostles
Dry wheat from its summer sleep
Sweat slides down my cheek [CG]

or are these tears? I have dreamt
a body turned green to gold [LB]

I have yet to lose
but losing comes in fast blows
to my consciousness [KT]
a body weary of heat
yearning for the sleep of fall [LK]

I enter the field
Merging with the golden wheat
One being, one self [CG]

Sorry I got so freaking Zen on the last stanza.

Labels: collaboration, poem, poetry, season, summer

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It's good to be one with the harvest

JT
# posted by Anonymous : 8:04 PM

-Oh yeah!-

the night is young,
Renga anyone?

--dummy
# posted by Anonymous : 8:10 PM

-Oh yeah!-

Glad you got the joke, dummy.
# posted by theorris : 12:28 AM

-Oh yeah!-

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